Monday, October 09, 2006

A Living Nightmare...

Imagine yourself going to a two years planned vacations. (1)You are going with your mother, father, sister, and your best friend. This was a perfectly planned vacation, nothing could ever go wrong; but I would think that twice. We were going to three main places (2) Cartagena, Barranquilla, and then back to Cartagena. We started at the sea in Cartagena. (3)The sea was dirty, filthy, and dark. Off course we didn’t think about it, we didn’t even went in, we just went to the car to go to Barranquilla, (4)the trip was in a chiva those long busses, it was long and horrybly hot!. I perfectly remember, (5) it was a Friday, it was in the afternoon turning into evening, and a pretty boring. We thought this vacation was going to be perfect, but as it looks, it was not. At the hotel in Barranquilla, the reception was hot, dirty, and they were slow to attend. (6) Yes, this is scary, but I had to get over it. What I was so a shame with was (7) while opening our apartment door,there was this nice family that thought there room was ours, so we had to fight over it, and all the hotel came to watch.Thankfully we've won it, but all of the sudden another family came saying that we were wrong, and that it wasn’t our room! Finally, we just went back home and didn’t have any vacations! At our house we found that (8) under the bed, we found the correct vacation planner!


(1): Independent clauses
(2): Prepositional
(3): Modifiers.
(4): Phrases
(5) Introductory adverb clause.
(6)Yes, No, Interjection
(7)Introductory participial phrases
(8) Introductory prepositional phrases.

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